Wednesday, October 31, 2012

The Day Everything Dissapeared

Rain was pouring from the sky as if I turned on the shower. It hasn’t been like this in years. All I could see was rain pouring on the skytower (we live at a house where it had a perfect view of the skytower). Rumours have been going around that on a day like this, something really bad is going to happen. It was called ‘CRUSADER DAY’. It wouldn’t of been today that something bad was going to happen. ‘POOF’. “What was that” I said as I quickly turned my head around.

My little brother Starford just fell on the ground. He started crying as if his eyes were clouds. “Where did the couch go” I said. ‘POOF’. “Did you hear that Starford” I said (there was no point talking to him). I heard it from two stories up in our house. The glass shaking as I was rushing to the elevator with Starford. “I gotta go find out what that is” I thought to myself. I ran as fast as I could to go to my room. Nothing was in there. My 6 iPads were gone, my 3 ps4’s were gone, my 10 iPhone 5’s were gone, everything was gone. My eyes were wide open, “CRUSADER DAY” I thought to myself.

‘POOF’ I heard it again. Mum and dads car parked outside, I quickly went to rush over and to the window and check and, the sky tower was gone. As I went downstairs to turn on the news, mum and dad walked in with the shopping, and it just disappeared. “The sky tower, statue of liberty everything has gone missing” The news man said. ‘POOF’, “MUM I CANT BREATH” I said to my mum struggling. The air disappeared. What were we going to do? We went to NASA to get some air tanks and as soon as we breathed in those air tanks, the sky tower came back. I knew how to solve this problem.

As quickly as I could I ran floated to the news station to tell everyone to go to NASA and get air tanks. “One breath of one person can bring back one thing, so hurry up”. ‘AAAHHHHH’ it sounded like everyone was choking and saying ahh at the same time. Everything came back and all we needed was a person to breath in so we could get air back, but everyone had already breathed in. I turned around and saw my little brother Starford with a really really purple face. I quickly grabbed a air tank for him, and everyone just dropped from the ground.

I was the hero of that day, because I saved everyone. That was an adventurous day, but it was also the most craziest day of my life, and I don’t ever want that to happen again.

Beach Narrative

The sun was burning my skin as if it was cooking me, sweat was dripping down my head, my ice cream was melting, and there was only one way to fix this, ‘A BEACH DAY!!’ I like to hear the sound of the waves crashing together on a hot day.

Before long sports balls were flying everywhere, and I was running up and down the sand.

Word was going around town that there was a monster called BEACHSTER that only killed people at the beach, and it JUST happened that we were at the beach. His real name was Louis Tomlinson. We had a boundary and everything, we all had to keep safe. None of us didn’t want anyone to go missing.

‘STOMP STOMP STOMP’ The ground was shaking, buildings were crashing to the ground, and it was coming. THE BEACHSTER WAS COMING TO OUR BEACH! “Lets go lets go, get everything you can and put it in the truck” My uncle Zayn said to everyone. “Grab all the kids” My brother Harry said. I was sacking it so badly. There was no way out.

One thing that we didn’t know is that there was an enemy of the BEACHSTER called the MAGICAL STRONGEST MAN IN THE WORLD, CRUSADER DUGAN!! And he always got close to killing the beachster. And this time he was confident that he was going to kill him because he found his weakness. His weakness was beach water. Thats why he always killed the people at the beach “Saltwater, his weakness is salt water” Crusader Dugan said. So we all got buckets of water from the beach and we threw it at him like there was no tomorrow. Every time a bucket of water that got thrown at him, He would drop, and drop, and drop.

Finally we killed the BEACHSTER and all this green gooey stuff was all over the the ground. “You finally killed him Crusader Dugan” I said, “No I didn’t, WE killed him”