Friday, June 17, 2011

Partly Cloudly

The main characters in this mini film are the clouds and the storks. The story is set in the sky. In the beggining of this story all the good storks in the sky have to deliver babies from the clouds. The main action for this story is that there are all these good clouds give good babies and there is this bad cloud which makes bad babies like crocidiles and sharks. The stork for the bad cloud goes to the other good clouds making the cloud think that he is now going over to the good clouds but actually he is going to get protective gear to protect him from getting hurt from the bad babies. I rate Partly Cloudly a 8 out of 10 because it was it was a good story line.

1 comment:

  1. It was an engaging story. What do you think the theme or message was?
    When I read you first sentence I'm not quite sure what you are writing about. Remember an introduction hooks and orientates.


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