This is a record of my learning during my time at Pt England School.
Hello Crusader,Awesome paragraph! Precious McKenzie is an amazing person. I really like this paragraph because it has speech and interesting vocab. Can't wait to read more amazing post. Keep up the awesome work!Vivienne
Hey Crusader,Wow that was a great paragraph. The way you described how he was hungry to win that gold medal came clearly through to me and I knew from that instant that he was determined to win it. Also that you have to have the determination to win.Keep up the great workCruz :)
Hey Crusader,What are fantastic story you have wrote. The way you described how he was hungry to win that gold medal was awesome because you described by using your words, great work buddy.Keep up the awesome work mate and I can't wait to see your next blog spot.
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