Mckenzie the weightlifter was hungry to win the gold medal. “The gold is mine, the gold is mine” he was thinking to himself. Focusing very hard to get what he wanted, he succeeded with determination.
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Hey Crusader,
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Hey Crusader,
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Keep up the awesome work mate and I can't wait to see your next blog spot.