Sliding rapidly, zooming in the swirling water, I was twisting and turning down the dark tunnel. The swirling water, propelled me into the pitch black hole. I was going towards a bit of light and knew that it was going to end. SPLASH!! and I was out.
Hi Crusader,
ReplyDeleteWell done. You used lots of interesting vocab as well as varied sentence beginning. Your picture is fantastic. It goes well with your writing. Keep up the awesome work Crusader.
Vivienne